Senryu - 74 (Above Ego) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 74 (Above Ego)

Rating: 5.0


true emotion states
that we keep relationship
above our ego.

Tuesday, November 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 10 November 2015

Yes! ! Ego is the downfall of almost everything

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Liza Sudina 11 November 2015

How many egos do we have?

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Sanjukta Nag 10 November 2015

Yes, ego is always an obstacle towards true love. Remarkable piece.10+

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Souren Mondal 10 November 2015

As Loke said below me, only when it is mutual... Thank you Asim a very well crafted Senryu :)

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Loke Kok Yee 10 November 2015

with lots of give and take thanks Asim-10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2015

Emotion states about relationship in definite phase of life. Interesting and amazing sharing done really...10

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