Senryu (Humour Haiku) -Rich Neighbourhoood's Rats Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Senryu (Humour Haiku) -Rich Neighbourhoood's Rats

Rating: 5.0


rich neighbourhood
the rats run around like
big swollen wallets

rich neighbourhood
the rats too
obese and slow

rich neighbourhood
amply stashed too
the rats

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Simone Inez Harriman 28 April 2016

I laughed out loud with your descriptive first stanza John..... 'rich neighbourhood the rats run around like big swollen wallets' love it....10

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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