Treasure Island

indira babbellapati

(visakhapatnam, india)

Senryu Once Again


Promises are high
Thick black clouds on the sky
Winds, sly!
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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/7/2013 10:52:00 AM)

    use of pun and shadowy words used so beautifully/Ur silence unlocks, My questions unstated, Answers abound
    Unuttered uttered many thing nice to read thank (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (8/30/2013 2:36:00 PM)

    for image and rhyming:

    Promises are high
    Thick black clouds on the sky
    Winds, sly!
    - - - - - - - - - - - - -
    for a specific feel:

    It makes us
    Jump, leap, up down
    Heart, with its own tact!
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
    for phrases:

    Ur silence unlocks
    My questions unstated
    Answers abound - - - - - - Beautiful! ! ! (Report) Reply

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