indira babbellapati

Rookie - 71 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Senryu Once Again - Poem by indira babbellapati

Promises are high
Thick black clouds on the sky
Winds, sly!
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Comments about Senryu Once Again by indira babbellapati

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/7/2013 10:52:00 AM)

    use of pun and shadowy words used so beautifully/Ur silence unlocks, My questions unstated, Answers abound
    Unuttered uttered many thing nice to read thank (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,255 Points Shahzia Batool (8/30/2013 2:36:00 PM)

    for image and rhyming:

    Promises are high
    Thick black clouds on the sky
    Winds, sly!
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    for a specific feel:

    It makes us
    Jump, leap, up down
    Heart, with its own tact!
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    for phrases:

    Ur silence unlocks
    My questions unstated
    Answers abound - - - - - - Beautiful! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,607 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/25/2013 6:37:00 AM)

    Questions unstated
    Answers abound
    Now we seek questions that match answers. Beautifully expressed. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,860 Points Dave Walker (8/24/2013 5:48:00 AM)

    Short and sweet, a great poem. (Report) Reply








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