Senryu Those Fairies Poem by Heather Burns

Senryu Those Fairies

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Those tiny fairies

sitting on a lily pad

enjoys the water.

Wednesday, October 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: fairytale
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 30 October 2014

Sweet and succinct.....nicely composed......Heather....I enjoyed it

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2014

Haiku with nice sentiments. Beautiful tiny poem presented.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 03 November 2014

Sitting on lily pad enjoys the water. Excellent three lines. Beautiful and expressive.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 02 November 2014

what a dramatic stroke on the wall of a poetical mind...Nice..

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Akhtar Jawad 02 November 2014

A beautiful description as if on a small boat a beautiful girl is enjoying the waves who are making all efforts to touch her.

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Geetha Jayakumar 31 October 2014

Beautiful Senryu short and sweet. Loved reading it.

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Salini Nair 31 October 2014

small but beautiful.............................enjoyed

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