Senses Poem by Marieta Maglas

Senses

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The words were broken into sounds
And the time was cracked in seconds.
The seconds were dismantled slowly.
I grasped my love and I laid it in remembrance,
I grasped my remembrance and I laid it in the grievance,
I grasped my grievance and I laid it in reason,
I grasped my reason and I laid it in myself,
I grasped myself and I stepped into the light,
I grasped the light and I laid it over the candle wax.
The candle dropped the light.
In the light, the sense of life became clear.
I grasped the sense of life and I laid it over the sense of death.
In this sense of life and death, you laid
The seconds, which were dismantled.
They melted in pieces of eternity.
I took those pieces and I gave them to The Lord.
I gave love your name.
I grasped my love and I laid it in remembrance
And I heard the empty bell ringing in the sky.
The bell would ring for someone else,
But I remembered you.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kamel kamel 23 July 2010

for me I Like this one ' I grasped my love and I laid it in remembrance. And I heard the empty bell ringing in the sky '

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 28 June 2010

Water-Fall poetry….culminated in, ‘I grasped the sense of life and I laid it over the sense of death’. The bottom and ultimate line… thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Marieta Maglas

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Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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