hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 19,696 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Serves best


“You are good poet”
“Simple and quiet”
Reader friends comment
I feel their warmth a present

Many write about short comings
Many suggest about some adding
Many suggest even about heading
It gives me so much pleasure in reading

I correct grammar part if noticed
No such mistakes in future is promised
How well being they are to suggest?
I always try to write to the best

If it privilege that they visit our page
Spend sometime and often chase
The concept behind and question
I smile little and reply with mention

It is holy bond
And I am very much fond
They are like mirror
To point out quickly about an errors

So they are semi god
Who carry our load?
For not being misquoted
And in time corrected

To become poet is awesome
It is product of mind and heart as one
Heart responds to mind’s quest
The end product serves as best

Submitted: Friday, April 18, 2014
Edited: Saturday, April 19, 2014

Topic of this poem: poem


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