Seven Seconds Of Everlasting Existence Poem by Captain Herbert Poetry

Seven Seconds Of Everlasting Existence

Rating: 4.9


We exist not because we are breathing,
We exist beyond external outward things,
We have differences in million ways.
We have trillion kind of Road of Lives in our planet
Billions of Shortcuts to get the elusive purpose
Many branches like veins of complexities
Every move, steps, and actions, there are variety of answers
But Maze of Questions like a multitude of sands rain and flooded the Core

We don't know
If all humanity will close their eyes in 7 seconds,
One word will continue the forever existence of All Unique Individuals and will last to everlasting,
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a simple word but it is the firm foundation of the lives of humanity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
P.k Freitas 29 November 2013

Oh wow! I so love this poem, elegantly composed and thought provoking as well.. Bravo poet.

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Erika Wingo 30 November 2013

This is lovely... I absolutely agree with the message!

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Roseann Shawiak 01 December 2013

An unusual way of describing humanity's existence, but I like it. Thank you for your comment and inviting me to read your poetry, I appreciate it. RoseAnn

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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 01 December 2013

Very nice and very true.

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Hannah Dollison 04 December 2013

beautiful poem indeed

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Etienne Charilaou 12 July 2017

Beauty is all ye need to know (Keats) Love is all ye need to be. :)

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Sonali Ganguly 16 May 2014

expression of thoughts, concept touched me

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Jonas Goncalves 08 May 2014

I totally love this poem! It's deep, reflexive and inspiring. The subject about existence is simple, but present.

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Helena Zen 06 May 2014

........broad and deep

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Vilma Gomez 04 May 2014

Every line, every words, every Stanzas are so BRILLIANT

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