Sex And Murder Poem by jackie Curtis

Sex And Murder



I loved you
So i did something about it
I tore your shirt
I pulled your pants
We made love
And you ignored me
I felt upset
You made it worse
I loved you
You screwed me over
So i hunted you down
And gave you
What you deserve

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 26 August 2012

A comment on diction? Well yes, and yet you leave us hanging. Read mine - lies - Adeline

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Gaylord Munemo 07 June 2012

short and precise, yet so interesting. Good diction and conclusion

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