Shades Of Nature! Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Shades Of Nature!

Rating: 4.8


BREEZE
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Fragrented calm and soothing breeze
Gently, caressing her silken tresses
Filling her with happiness.

STORM
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Growling air, filled with dust
Gushes and destroys everything on its way
Calmness follows, like deathly hollow.

TORNADO
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Angry wind full of lust
Invades the innocent and calm nature
Leaving behind – ruined serenity allover.

RAIN
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Droplets of water
Satiates the greedy earth
Qenching its thirst.

~~05/05/08~~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 07 May 2008

an anthology, rare...miniature roses all...

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R.k Das 07 May 2008

such varied shades hues and sounds and sights of nature can only be observed by a sensitive poet, and shown to the readers, thanx

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 May 2008

your shades of writing reminding us of how powerful is mother natures.

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Vidi Writes 07 May 2008

Journeyof human life Is filled with shades Each shade with Distinct action, colour and worth. One who can understand These distinctions and take care Will survive better in this life. The above shades of nature Taught me a few lessons of life. Nice one. Thank you.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 August 2009

Ammmmazing pictographs! REMARKABLE! 10+

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Sameer Ahmed 09 July 2009

The scenical patterns of Nature's few peculiar things are very well lit with wonderful words.....

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Surya . 14 May 2009

beautifull and apt defnitions.nice poem.voted 10 surya

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Mamta Agarwal 05 May 2009

very vivid word images, brings nature alive in all its shades

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Koyel Mitra 18 September 2008

Lovely pieces of haikus threaded together.A 10.!

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