Shadow Poem by d4rk0y sugbuanon

Shadow

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Dark clouds heavily covering the sky
like the tears in my eyes that wont run dry
the moon hardly shining
like ur love that is fading

many days i was in state of pain
more than flesh and blood can bear
enough to make a person swear
enough to provoke a saint

my heart shattered into peices
thought i try to be insane
my dreams all comes wasted
coz with you i feel so neglicted

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AkosiDArk Sugbuanon 15 July 2009

thanks naseer.....really appreciate your comments.....wishin u the best too...

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 July 2009

Edward Young says: '' Like our shadows, our wishes lenghten as our sun declines ''. Exactly like in this poem the feeling of melancholy has been encountered so wonderfully that it reflects the awful state of mind of the poetess..... Best Wishes Naseer

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d4rk0y sugbuanon

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Cebu City, Philippines
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