Lawerence Mize, Sr.

Freshman - 749 Points (October 29,1949 / Baltimore, Maryland)

Shadows - Poem by Lawerence Mize, Sr.

The shadows come
The shadows go
Usually when I'm weak
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Comments about Shadows by Lawerence Mize, Sr.

  • Gold Star - 50,292 Points Chinedu Dike (6/12/2015 10:14:00 PM)

    Fear is a bunch of sinister shadows. A shadow has no substance, it's usually a magnified reflection of something small, that's why upon standing boldly before it, one often find it inconsequential. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,748 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (1/23/2015 5:54:00 AM)

    Hello Lawerence, first thanks for your support and review. I loved your poem, well written and so true about those of us who have started going down hill. Thank you for your service, I salute. You might enjoy my poem, An Old Soldier. Great poem, I enjoyed, Loyd (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,414 Points Smoky Hoss (5/8/2013 8:59:00 AM)

    I agree with Valerie, and certainly hope you remain here writing for many years to come!
    Good, thought-provoking poem here; I like these poems that give me cause to ponder. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,678 Points Valerie Dohren (4/12/2013 12:02:00 PM)

    Hope those shadows don't take you away yet Lawrence - great poem, very well penned. (Report) Reply

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