Gabriela Duricova

Rookie (22.5.1984 / Bratislava)

Shall We Dance? - Poem by Gabriela Duricova

Shall we dance in clever rhymes
In deepest sea or heavens blue?
And shall I gladly commit crimes
Of vows for I'm in love with you?

And what if I run out of words?
Or maybe I'll become so shy
Of truth that now just my heart hurts
But in the end it will kill thy

So tonight I'll just take your hand
And turn my look to skies above
In hope they'll water this dry land
Or that they’ll send us a white dove

In her beck carrying an olive sprout
To fill my mind with peace instead of doubt


Comments about Shall We Dance? by Gabriela Duricova

  • Freshman - 718 Points Dimitri Jagodinski (9/10/2013 10:15:00 PM)

    Love your poems. You write in a beautiful fashion. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 23 Points Messaoud Allalouche (8/27/2013 3:49:00 PM)

    wow, i like this poem very much(shall we dance) really it's a very good poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,480 Points Sandra Feldman (8/26/2013 4:42:00 AM)

    Very good, enjoyed. Dasvidagna, (Im sure the spelling is incorret so, Thank You for the lovely poem)
    Clever, poetic and pleasant.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 26, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 26, 2013


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