Freewill Amon

Rookie (18th Sept 1987)

She - Poem by Freewill Amon

Her eyes glitters like the icing on a cake.
Bosom so smooth like hot loaded bowl of pounded yam
Her breasts are like bunches of grapes
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is a fantasy about intimacy. This is the way I hope my woman will make me feel. And the height mentioned is my actual height.

Comments about She by Freewill Amon

  • Rookie - 249 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (8/3/2013 9:48:00 AM)

    very well written. Every word is made of a nice emotional portion. Love the way that the feelings have been spread. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (5/18/2013 11:12:00 AM)

    Love us the greatest gift in the world and true love is absolute bliss. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,479 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/18/2013 6:50:00 AM)

    my cheery and sweat-pea. good work. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply








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