She Poem by niranjan subhashsivan

Well she most definetly sounds like a great person.And its wonderful how you connect with that person within you.great poem.

Subhash, The poem overall conveys a sense of longing and loneliness. I read it and think of a shadow constantly following one around in silence. On a more nitpicky note… I wonder of the use of ‘and often quite peace’. Did you mean quiet? If you didn’t perhaps consider it? … A lovely write. -Eila

Your poems are really one of a kind! ! ! hope you enjoy writing the best... good luck, keep up the good work...

hmm...this is an interesting riddle... each one can interpret it in his/her own way... nice write... Asma...

the 'she' you have described here.. can be connected with many things.. good one..

I like your poem very much its lovely how you describe her =D