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She, A Romantic Poem - Poem by aung si myanmar

That day, God sent her to me
Just for 30 minutes, it is momentary.
Young, charming and lovely
Sincere, shrew and brainy.
Ow! words fail how I was happy.

Sometimes, for the earth to be peaceful,
For colorful flowers to bloom,
For nutrient plants to grow,
Mankind stares up the sky.
Ow! they wish the clouds for shower mild.

To present a cool rain-drop,
Blue sea must be burnt off.
Where is justice for nature right?
The blood of her heart vaporizes.
Ow! which mindful one does memorize?

Heart absorbs all feelings and suffers
When much, they run over through eyes as tears.
My God! is it real nature?
To own love-blooms in chest deepest,
Ow! it's inner raining running into mad.

'Her eyes are demure diamonds
Below the rainbows of eyebrows'
I compose this sort of verses with rhythm,
And feel it by myself as a gem.
Ow! does she love poems?

Truth and untruth, equity and inequity.
As she crave truth and equity,
I notice that she has fair fancy,
And she is gifted in poetry.
Ow! words fail how I feel ecstasy.

She loves verses, I love verses.
Though we're strangers and have different breaths,
Poems make us two not to mope.
Poems make us two hearts to close.
Ow! how a brave beauty like a rose! ! !

Without appealing, without tempting,
She melts in heart beating.
Arteries and veins allow her in circulating.
Finally, fingers shake and grasp a pen.
Ow! it becomes 'she, a romantic poem'


Comments about She, A Romantic Poem by aung si myanmar

  • Silver Star - 4,460 Points Ken E Hall (10/28/2012 5:28:00 AM)

    Feelings drip from the pen 'Ow! it becomes 'she, a romantic poem' original look at the love poem well done indeed...regards (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 154 Points Young Church Poetry (10/15/2012 10:53:00 AM)

    Lovely poem with beautiful verses, brilliant work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hla Thandarwai (10/10/2012 5:15:00 AM)

    Finally, fingers shake and grasp a pen.
    Ow! it becomes 'she, a romantic poem'
    I love these verses.Keep it up! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,139 Points * Sunprincess * (10/9/2012 9:07:00 AM)

    oh this is a very nice poem..excellent write.. :)
    I agree with these lines..
    Poems make us two not to mope.
    Poems make us two hearts to close. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 184 Points Karen Sinclair (10/8/2012 5:35:00 AM)

    hello, a sweet write of enthusiasm and infatuation... so full of the joys of youth... i wondered immediately the significance of 30 mins but i love conundrums and suggestive thoughts...im not sure but i think you wrote this and created her? through the write, so when we leave the poem she is no longer here (i hope you know what i mean) a slice of your imagination.... lovely clever and thought provoking...tyvm (Report) Reply

  • Rookie So Close (9/20/2012 7:53:00 AM)

    ya... its quite long but it keeps its beauty throughout the poem....nice...: -)

    »so close« (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sunny Rose (9/20/2012 7:52:00 AM)

    Heart absorbs all feelings and suffers
    When much, they run over through eyes as tears.....wow Aung si ur the best keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eindaray Kyaw (9/20/2012 7:37:00 AM)

    Yes..as u say..this is quite long..but is really worth to enjoy this coz this is an emotional great poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,470 Points Unwritten Soul (9/20/2012 4:24:00 AM)

    A lovely poem and you crafting the words very nice, i like the teenage sounds in your poem, bold and vibrant..keep it up _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zero Ro (9/20/2012 2:10:00 AM)

    I like a lot this kind of poem. If it is a true, I also want to be but a moment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 264 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (9/20/2012 1:24:00 AM)

    This poem is really Romantic and lovely. A lovely thing from God.
    i like it.well done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 20, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 20, 2012


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