She Can’t See That Is Killing Me Poem by Yasser Koor

She Can’t See That Is Killing Me

Rating: 5.0


No more love after her love
Now she is gone ….eternally
Her pride with her heresy
She can’t see, that is killing me
My heart reeled with grave poetry

This pain is deep
I tore free of my sleep
And the screams hunt my sleep
Dragged from nightmares we had wed together
She leaves me
I sought refuge in a grieving mind
She leaves me with my soul dirge

The curse of her unrest
And her ardent caress
Came much more than my soul endure
She can’t see that is killing me

I need a place to hide and live
I need a grave to sleep
She leaves me through the gathering gloom
To rotting alone in my empty room
She leaves me to the pain
She leaves me to the doom

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Little Hatila ;) 13 February 2009

This is very sad Yasser, but it is good to bring out and write down what you are feeling deep inside, it is the best of your work..... Good luck and God bless you....10 Hataw

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Eyan Desir 13 February 2009

hmmm, nice poem..............

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Marria Attar 14 February 2009

The words in your poem have so much meaning and the rhymes are very nice..10

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Vinod Kumar 14 February 2009

very much impressived lines actually to holding the total pain is a pleasure, she can`t see that is how vexatious, great write thanks,10++

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Catrina Heart 14 February 2009

Such a poignant poem woven with great poetic language...10

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sumaira .....ir 13 February 2009

so sad dear hope you get better one keep writing dear........

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ata khan 13 February 2009

Very sad, but nicely penned... Keep it up Yasser

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