I am not A POET

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She Never Gives Any................ - Poem by I am not A POET

She takes all the pain,
she never gives any,

She takes all the strain,
she never gives any,

She takes all the stress,
But she never gives any

She takes all the blame,
But she never gives any,

But what she gives is
Care and love with a sweet smile.


Comments about She Never Gives Any................ by I am not A POET

  • Rookie - 160 Points Meena Mustafa (7/29/2012 10:19:00 PM)

    Lovely :) such a sweet poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 131 Points Ahmed Abomahfouz (7/7/2012 11:14:00 PM)

    beautiful poem..it is delicate to appreciate what she takes and what she gives (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,223 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (7/1/2012 11:37:00 PM)

    it's a good poem and you are a good poet...You leave behind statements and questions that just dangle... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,266 Points Valerie Dohren (6/30/2012 6:20:00 AM)

    Short and simple, but with a great message - good one, and I think you are a poet! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 740 Points Kaila George (6/26/2012 11:44:00 PM)

    Your write like a true poet, I dare you to write more, please I would like to see more of your work, throws the gaunlet down, are you ready for the challange my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 108 Points Vipins Puthooran (6/23/2012 3:29:00 PM)

    Really good poem! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,625 Points Neela Nath (6/21/2012 10:15:00 PM)

    Simple but respect for her showered thru words.Wonderful. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,908 Points Soulful Heart (3/5/2012 4:23:00 AM)

    is that ur mother? ...........................nicely put (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ranis Thomas iii (2/2/2012 8:21:00 AM)

    Very nice! Simple and straight to the point! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arathy Sj (11/10/2011 9:48:00 AM)

    nice poem...it says a lot with a few words...lovely.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie (De Va) (11/5/2011 6:46:00 AM)

    nice write...I can feel your adoration in this work...thx for sharing...blessings....and keep up the good writing of your soul.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Theany Ouy (10/29/2011 9:30:00 AM)

    Beautifully written, I was zoned there for a moment because it was so pleasant to read. Thank you for sharing... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Karima Astrid P (10/26/2011 8:39:00 AM)

    Are you sure you are not a poet?
    Nice write you have in there. Simple but amazing :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,971 Points Kee Thampi (10/26/2011 12:41:00 AM)

    the white mellow
    She takes all the blame,
    But she never gives any, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 132 Points Marcus Mckinley (10/25/2011 3:12:00 PM)

    reminds one of a mothers love, unconditional

    great job (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,681 Points Dave Walker (9/18/2011 2:02:00 PM)

    This is really good. Good write. May i invite you
    To read my poem called, boy to a man. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Nanthinii Mohan (9/18/2011 11:34:00 AM)

    great credit to the lady you love.....well written...loved it....... :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,040 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (9/18/2011 10:18:00 AM)

    simple and beautiful. who is this lady? mother, i suppose. pl. read some of mine and judge. shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sajna Kailas (9/18/2011 4:44:00 AM)

    you really rocked........... that is the skill given to women by god to take all the pains and give back love and care to their beloved ones with great patience and sincerety.you proved that you are a keen observer. i loved it. very nice. keep it up! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Renu Kakkar (9/17/2011 12:34:00 PM)

    very nice...depicting womenhood but more would be mother (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 17, 2011



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