(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

What do you think this poem is about?

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She lives with constant state pf fear
Doesn't speak well as if forced to bear
Nothing abnormal has taken place for her
Yet she is very much tense and continues to bother

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I teased her by saying "moon has surfaced on earth'
Lovely face is here to play havoc and cause the death
She lost her temper when sarcastically commented
Withdrew suddenly and absented to resent

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I thought of and resorted to do something
To bring her back in smile by naturally acting
I was not ready to see her in angry mood
Thought to retrieve before it got out of control and misunderstood

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I thought of teasing her little more
Rub the salt on wounds and explore
To see how does she suffer from cruel joke?
How she reacts with tearful face under smoke?

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She is no fool to understand change
Time being let down but not too fool to manage
But it has worsened to such stage that she didn't want to give in so easily
I too firmly decided not to agree that readily

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She realized it soon and accepted
Retrieved the lost position and respected
Smiled gently as if nothing had happened
Moon face lit up and showed as it did not take place even

Submitted: Friday, February 17, 2012


Comments about this poem (?? ???? ?? ???.. she remains by hasmukh amathalal )

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  • Stevens Cadet (2/22/2012 6:48:00 PM)

    Wow. Had to read this like three times. Different style, good piece

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2012 7:33:00 AM)

    ?? ???? ?? ???.. she remains


    ?? ???? ?? ??? ???? ???? ??
    ??? ?? ???? ???? ???? ?????? ?? ???? ??
    ??? ?? ??? ?? ???? ??? ?? ???? ???????? ???
    ?? ????? ?? ??? ?? ?? ???? ?? ???? ???

    She lives with constant state pf fear
    Doesn’t speak well as if forced to bear
    Nothing abnormal has taken place for her
    Yet she is very much tense and continues to bother

    0 person liked.
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