Shimmering Poem by Susy Evelyne

Shimmering

Rating: 4.5


The first time I saw the shimmering
It seemed to me I was dreaming.
A pool of hazy blue appearing
In the dip of the downs,
As if a season's rain had filled
That bowl overnight.

Was it water or an illusion,
This marvel unfolding before me,
Like a mirage of summer sky?

Drawing closer, I saw a field
Of flax. Flowers and leaves
Inter-weaving ten thousand times
And gleaming in the sun.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by a pale-blue flax field in the Sussex Downs, near Brighton.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Katona 15 March 2015

Thank you for taking me on a sunny summer's journey from a watery mirage to nature at its best. A delight to read and experience.

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Khairul Ahsan 19 November 2013

A beautiful imagery drawn by the poet that acquaints the readers with 'a flax field': 'Drawing closer, I saw a field Of flax. Flowers and leaves Inter-weaving ten thousand times And gleaming in the sun.' This stanza reminded me of the two lines from William Wordsworth's 'Daffodils': ' Ten thousand saw I at a glance, Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.' She has a truly imaginative mind, like that of great poets.

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John Brown 24 October 2013

I like the poem, though I have never seen a field of flax.

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