, Shimmering Whispers Poem by Louise Tredoux

, Shimmering Whispers

Rating: 4.5


Then my heart opened up
like a flower unto the sun
of your words, the pain of
humiliation leaving me

Rejection in shadows lifting
up, I saw beauty and grace
everywhere, heard music in
laughter, feelings of despair

Leaving my heart, this gift of
shimmering whispers the most
sumptuous delicacy, fragile like
the finest glass, more precious

Than everything cherished before,
more beautiful - every new thought
always eclipses those that existed
before, every day your words

Are a new stream of joy-creating,
life-giving energy…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 09 July 2009

An evocative title. And the contents of your poem does not disappoint. Eloquent.... Kind regards, Sandra

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