Shine With Day Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Shine With Day

Rating: 5.0


Dear souls you shine
As this day has arrived
We have to awaken soon
Hold colour of life here.

Values and virtues more
You acquire to dazzle
Making fortune you sing
God commands we do right.

This day has come near
Appearing in lap of dawn
Rays have adored purity
Happiness is seen in life.

Good wishes are shared
Nature is blissful sure
You all gather wisdom
You shine doing meditation.

Wednesday, September 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 28 September 2016

This day has come near Appearing in lap of dawn Rays have adored purity Happiness is seen in life Amazing imagery. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Effran Menny 21 October 2020

Soul dazzles with own power. Soul is compared with sun here. Your poems are very powerful.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 November 2016

Shine with the works of the truth! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 October 2016

An amazing spiritual poem.............. Good wishes are shared Nature is blissful sure You all gather wisdom You shine doing meditation.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 30 September 2016

Simple thoughts that purify - your poems are filled with them. Thanks. (10)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 September 2016

The day unfolds as sun rises. A new day. New thoughts. New hopes. Gather wisdom and move on. Beautifully said. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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