Shooting Star Poem by eleeda rajack

Shooting Star

Rating: 5.0


last night i sat down on the lawn
looking for shooting stars again
but all i saw in the night sky dark
was only a airplane

night after night, again and again
i looked at the sky dark
for the star to grant my wish:
a trip to the water park

then one saturday night i stood
under the moon-lit sky
like a turbo-rocket
a shoot star passed by

that night i made my wish:
to the water park on sunday
and in the morning believe it or not
we were on our way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 05 February 2012

Like it, a really great poem, really like it. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Stand Tall.

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