Should Life Be Lived? Poem by laura random

Should Life Be Lived?

Rating: 5.0


Why is life so cruel?
Cruel to some but not to others
Why is life so bad?
Bad to some but not to others

I wish life was easy to take away
Because I can not bare to fight another day
Time and time again I've tried
But it feels like I'm only trying to hide

If I try again and I succeed
Does that make me selfish?
Does that make me mean?

Should I live through the pain?
Or should I choose to break the chain?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nurain Ali-balogun 23 September 2012

I hope you'll choose to live through the pain, rather than breaking the chain. Much comfort reside deeply in every pain, if only we take the pain to seek it.

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Romeo Della Valle 23 September 2012

Of course life is worth living even with its ups and downs! Has been granted to you by the Mighty One above to enjoy and make the best of it! No matter how hard is for you, there is always Faith, Hope and Love behind it! This a very touching and well crafted write that clearly shows your feelings and talent! Give life a chance and Time Will Tell something different along your way! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! I can see your potential in the Poetry World and way day you will make it to the top! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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