Show Really Down Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Show Really Down

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I feared a show down
With life of my own
Unmindful of universally known facts
That everything depended on act

As the sun was lowering
I felt as if it had intention of some offering
In the form of blessings
So far truly, in fact, was missing

The clouds seemed to have never tuned red
Changed scene from life to that of dead
Sometimes appeared as horse
And sometimes devil rushed with force

Its direct reflection on calm water
Created a long shadow and then altered
It created panic in my mind
I raised head toward sky to find

Was it pointer of an arrow?
Had to observe something and follow?
I got puzzled and looked towards sky
So much in confusion and asked why?

Clouds just threatened with thunder
Was I committing any blunder?
There appeared sign of shining cross in gold
So many thoughts crossed mind and told

There is hope in decline
One must strive for good line
Even hope to be build in sinking ship
Glimmer of hope should continue and never resort to weep

There was no upheaval on earth
There was no cyclone, earth quakes or any death
It was sign of divine appearance
One must consider himself to be lucky by chance

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2012

Noel Peake15 minutes ago The simplistic rhymes distracted me from the beauty of the message.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2012

Insan Lara6 minutes ago so true....sometimes we are lucky by chance...sometimes but not all the time.....why.. Comment +1 Rhyme

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2012

Muhammad Rafique Farooqi Your poetry is dedicated art of soul and mind for readers, and you write for the glory of humanity. 36 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2012

I feared a show down With life of my own

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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