Manonton Dalan

Gold Star - 30,261 Points (virginia, usa)

Shrinking Space - Poem by Manonton Dalan

Where? where are birds
when i, i needed them
going south of border
were there spaces left
them to stay for winter
food to keep coming back

they ain't flying today?
i saw none going this way
maybe took a long route
but i should be waiting
for them to pass me by
or grow wings with smile

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  • Wes Vogler (12/28/2015 1:34:00 AM)


    You use i instead of I and I am starting to like it. It is distinctive. Great last line or grow wings with smile
    Here in Canada we love to hear and see the V's of geese honking like old Ford cars.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 23, 2013


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