Side Of Both Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Side Of Both

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Life when you breathe
No breathe means death
You are like wood
Now may turn to earth’s food

Body shall melt
Nothing shall be felt
It will be back to origin
Nothing to feel in

So the difference
One must draw inference
Life and death
Coin on side of both

Friday, April 18, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

Life when you breathe No breathe means death

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

Stuti Nayak likes this. Stuti Nayak Amazing..birth-absolute truth thro the life-the beautiful lie low down to death-unavoidable truth.. 7 mins · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

This my father said when I asked about death, were you afraid to be born? the poem is the same consideration, so celebrate the day together dear poet your poems always make me think and learn 24 minutes ago by leafsailors Ghost | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

k That's something inspiring.. 23 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

Emilia Ayuk likes this. Emilia Ayuk From dust we came and to dust we shall retturn, this has always keep me wondering at the both sides of the coin of death and life 35 mins · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 April 2014

tt Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 6 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

welcome shujat 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

Life and death. Robin PatirLess than a minute ago Death is not the end of life.Soul is immortal.It transform from one form to another. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

nice poem Créatif WordLess than a minute ago I like the way you liken death to wood and our subsequent melt away into the earth; from the earth we were born and to the earth we return...but i didn't understand your last line Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

either to complex or just too random Alex Whipp2 minutes ago i struggled to follow your train of thought and to draw pictures of meaning from your analogies Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago coin has two sides.. life and death... soul is coul

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