Sigh Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

Sigh

Rating: 4.5


She did not smile when I walked down the aisle
I sensed as if she was on a trial
How will she know I am truly nice
What’s instilled in her mind is otherwise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 26 August 2013

it is only on faith. faith or trust is most powerful, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems.

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Marvin Brato 24 January 2014

Short yet though provoking poem...who is she?

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Miriam Maia Padua 09 September 2013

Sigh... make my heart sighs too....this is mind-working your words make my heart sighs... The title itself projects its complete thought and the title alone Sigh, is poetry thank you. happy to read this touching, a little bit abstract..as if a sonnet needs to be analyze whats the conclusion and the meaning behind...wholesome...mysterious..strong yet with a hidden fragility within Im waiting for the next stanza.....*smile*

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Khairul Ahsan 03 September 2013

Like many others, I too am curious to know who she is. Is she your mother in law or his ex? An attractive title for the nice, short poem. A sigh well released, now cheer up!

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 29 August 2013

very good poem, with descriptive elegance. Well done!

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Marcus Mckinley 28 August 2013

is this a wedding? are you takinjg about your new mother in-law? if you are she may never see you for who you truly are.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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