Dr subhendu kar

Rookie - 166 Points (Bhubaneswar, Orissa, India)

SILENCE WHEN INTONES


When I lie lone
silence yet intones
the highway
when meandering
trudging with the trees green

each step in its shadow
when braced up by the dream
wakes me up still being alone
the smiles yet a head rambles in blue

the moon fledging behind
I remember the novels of night
your eyes stunned in grin
for many years seeming green

shadow trails behind
moon still glimmers
looking crescent when expired
I chased beyond and within

dew seems to be coalesced
by the gleams fledging through
days after days i stood alone
on the beach of the oceanic waves
yet looking alone to its blue azure

Submitted: Wednesday, April 02, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, April 02, 2008

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Comments about this poem (SILENCE WHEN INTONES by Dr subhendu kar )

  • Rookie - 0 Points Emancipation Planz (6/29/2008 2:12:00 AM)

    Beautiful descriptions here Subham.... tis interesting that even within silence there a tones that stir 10derly all around... aroha (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Abha Sharma (4/3/2008 2:59:00 AM)

    this one is very touching...the reader truely identifies with this kind of lonliness while reading...,
    When I lie lone
    silence yet intones
    ...great lines and deep thinking... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Broken Peaces (4/2/2008 5:00:00 PM)

    Vivid colours and imagry put the reader on a different plain thankyou for sharing this patchwork of words Chris (Report) Reply

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