Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 5,747 Points (Bhubaneswar, Orissa, India)

Silence When Intones - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

When I lie lone
silence yet intones
the highway
when meandering
trudging with the trees green

each step in its shadow
when braced up by the dream
wakes me up still being alone
the smiles yet a head rambles in blue

the moon fledging behind
I remember the novels of night
your eyes stunned in grin
for many years seeming green

shadow trails behind
moon still glimmers
looking crescent when expired
I chased beyond and within

dew seems to be coalesced
by the gleams fledging through
days after days i stood alone
on the beach of the oceanic waves
yet looking alone to its blue azure

Topic(s) of this poem: silence

Form: Blank Verse


Comments about Silence When Intones by Dr subhendu kar

  • Bharati Nayak (10/21/2016 3:22:00 AM)


    When I lie lone
    silence yet intones
    the highway
    when meandering
    trudging with the trees green
    - - - - - - - - - - In silence dream intones - - - - - - A beautiful poem with lovely flow of words.
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  • (6/29/2008 2:12:00 AM)


    Beautiful descriptions here Subham.... tis interesting that even within silence there a tones that stir 10derly all around... aroha (Report) Reply

  • (4/3/2008 2:59:00 AM)


    this one is very touching...the reader truely identifies with this kind of lonliness while reading...,
    When I lie lone
    silence yet intones
    ...great lines and deep thinking...
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  • (4/2/2008 5:00:00 PM)


    Vivid colours and imagry put the reader on a different plain thankyou for sharing this patchwork of words Chris (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, October 21, 2016


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