Silent Poem by Kyle Richards

Silent



I hear the rain fall,
Pitter patter, on the wall,
As I await the call,
From the pitter patter,
Of my heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aliya Deri 02 July 2007

I liked this a lot, especially how the last line broke from the rhyming pattern. I also liked relating rain to heartbeats...nice imagery!

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