Silent Nights Poem by Thampi KEE

Silent Nights

Rating: 4.9


one silent night
I went there
you gave me a wing
wings to fly

one silent night
I went to a fly
you gave me a wing


when I fly
you made a silent cry
cry your hearts.....
lonely you
call me a black....
lonely nights you cries for me

I went to sky
I went to woods
pray for you....
a sweet breath here.....

cry your hearts
tell your nights....
pray for mine,
sweet breath fine.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Eisenhower 17 January 2007

that's a beutiful poem. I like how it trails off so much with the dot-dot-dot's. It gives it such a pensive tone. are you really from india? ... that's so cool! ... ~Rose

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Sandra Fowler 19 January 2007

The melancholy music of the night is captured in this nostalgic poem. Take care. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Raveendran . 15 May 2007

Silent night, lonely night, your night, silent cry, radheshyama...

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Kesav Easwaran 12 June 2008

breath obstructed...words interrupted...sadness out flowing in the lines. let the wings be rested...the night sleep peaceful, thampi...10

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Minnu Serah 03 July 2008

hai...its simply beautiful...

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Louis Cecile 21 October 2011

The opposite of the silent night with tears is most well played.

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Minu Alex 11 May 2011

Lovely! The sweet breath fine...

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 25 April 2011

the silent night promises many things, one is to find the real you, and to liberate emotions nice poem

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blank blank 09 February 2010

a nice poem on the humans natural desire to be alone. It's true that silent nights will bring tears to the mournfull soul who tends to forget his troubles during the busy moments of the day. nice.10.

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Rachel Butler 06 September 2009

a sweet breath here..... Rachel Ann Butler

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