Silent Predator Poem by White Slash

White Slash

White Slash

some where in a farm house in Okalahoma

Silent Predator

Rating: 4.7


I lurk around every corner
Watching every move you make
Watching you not knowing
Something is out there moving swiftly among the shadows
Planning my next move
As I watch you pray tonight is not your last

But for me this will be a blast
Knowing tonight is the last that you’re breathing
Or says my knife

As they bury you six feet under
In a coffin and tears
I will always lurk
Waiting for two three and four

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Silence Dogood 02 January 2009

I prefer the night and shining armor poem better but I loved the line ' buried six feet under in a coffin and tears' I may have gotten that sentence wrong but yeah you get the point nice job

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Stacey Watts 29 December 2008

What a wow piece. My gosh I think in my opinion you are the best dark writer here. Wow I can't wait to read more. Chilling! ! ! 10 from me. I can't believe this is your first piece.

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*Trusting You* 28 December 2008

the Saint is right.... this is a nice 'dark' poem.you did a great job for your first one. that is wat the poor man meant he doesnt know how to talk sometimes that is why he has me to help him in times of need...lol. I really enjoyed seeing u write it. good job. Becca

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Saint Cynosure 28 December 2008

Nice....................

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some where in a farm house in Okalahoma
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