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SILENT SILVER

Silence adrift with golden sunset.
Fallen shadows cast upon mankind.
Silent hopes and dreams of reality.
Cast forth with silver silence.
Set adrift upon milk fed shores.
Calling forth the inner shadows.
Setting the fallen idol in raptures.
Casting spells which reflect kindness.
Sunken fallen empty hollow ship.
Cast forth the raptures into silence.
Empty bottomless silence, king of hearts.
Fallen idols again sound to silver silence.
Beat upon the wind swept shores of life.

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JESUS SAVES

Submitted: Wednesday, November 19, 2008


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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (6/12/2010 4:07:00 AM)

    i think i understood the message here beyond what i can see and it is good as always... it came from you sir. excellent write!

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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (8/11/2009 5:32:00 AM)

    Yes, the title is beautiful and so is the poem. It has an ethereal quality and wonderful descriptive work. 10 Karin Anderson

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  • Yelena M. (6/22/2009 7:38:00 AM)

    The play of words and colours is amazing here..Thanks for sharing and best wishes to you.
    A.

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  • Reshma Ramesh (2/8/2009 12:54:00 AM)

    beautiful title and a haunting poem.............well penned

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  • Fiona Davidson (1/15/2009 7:00:00 PM)

    Lovely images you have painted here Joe...I love this poem...Fi

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  • Karla Bardanza (11/19/2008 8:00:00 AM)

    Great images! Nice poem!

    Karla Bardanza

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