Silly Fights Poem by Fatima Obaid

Silly Fights

Rating: 5.0


whenever they had a fight on
words of disgrace were passed on
On their every single talk
she Barks at him at all
The more his voice grew soft
The more her voice grew harsh
LOVE; the only reason of them as together
vanished slowly with silly messy fights
And when his patience level got high
he turned to her with an staring eye
looking deep into her eye
And said just One word; GoodBye
There then she stands; with end of love
The reddish sky spits and Roar High above

Friday, January 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fight
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
relationship gets week when Silly-messy fights goes on.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhinit Chute (abz) 18 February 2015

Good rhyme-scheme. Though it flowed well, it was kind of too plain. Add figures of speech for better impact. Good read and Good luck.

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Mohammad Skati 08 February 2015

Thanks, great poet Fatima, for this great and lovely poem. It's really that kind of poems that needs someone to read it many times. I loved it. I will keep read it whenever I have time. Good luck.

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