Sin-Seed And Others Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Sin-Seed And Others

Rating: 4.7


1. Cool snake in soul-case
Gloomy face in the jail-cell
A sleeping sin-seed

2. Dawn walking morning
Black butterfly sits on black hair
Illustrated peccadillo

3. Saffron dusk on chair
Cheerful evening’s dark chocolates
Pocketful dainty sin

4. Lust sits on the bench
Swarming night-bus on the street
Thorny love-calyx

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 31 May 2009

Poetic observation of sinful things warns well to the readers!

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Catrina Heart 31 May 2009

richly metaphorical verses...................10+++

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Sandra Fowler 31 May 2009

Your imagery resonates. Excellent work. It would be hard to pick a favorite. Warm regards, Sandra

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Tsira Goge 31 May 2009

Ashraful, It is very melodious and classical the Haiku, you are master in this 'business'..10.. Best wishes, Tsira

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Very powerful way of inventorying strong emotions

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Philophical thought expressed in easy way.... beatiful write and i appricaite so much,

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Shashendra Amalshan 08 June 2009

you know it s a special talent u got...It is been two months since i came to the site.... and you always seems to come up with special short verses....most times the format is always the same....but very innovative and enjoy them every time i read them 'Gloomy face in the jail-cell' nice rite 10+++ regards shan

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Muhammad Ali 08 June 2009

O great work daer friend! ! lovely piece of art! 10..

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Roshni D'Souza 07 June 2009

Amazing imagery with plenty to ponder...Great write! Thanks, roshni.

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Fiona Davidson 05 June 2009

Excellent piece Ashraful....10++++

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