Sing In His Praise Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Sing In His Praise

Rating: 5.0


I breathed heavily
As it pinched me really
Nothing could save me
From feeling easy and free

I did harm to some one
In fact it was known to none
Yet I felt it with deep remorse
I was awakened by divine force

Who am I to cause trouble?
Why someone should be made to struggle?
What good it may deliver?
I felt bad and shivered

I took vow not to repeat
Looked toward sky and accepted defeat
Not more such things in future
I needed soul to reassure

In this holy moth I took vow
Knell down honestly and bowed
The sanctity of holy views followed
Prayed almighty for good conduct to be allowed

I feel suddenly relieved
As I have often believed
God does help to that sincere human being
Who wants to repent and in His praise sing?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 August 2012

I breathed heavily As it pinched me really Nothing could save me From feeling easy and free

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 August 2012

Porshyee Burton Yes, God certainly helps those who care for others and praise His glory! Nice poem. 25 minutes ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 January 2013

needs a few corrections but sentiment good Andy LyleLess than a minute ago well written Comment +1 I love it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 January 2013

Elias Foukis1 minute ago Good poem Comment +1 ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 January 2013

Ronald McWilliams2 minutes ago its ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 August 2012

Re: Sing in His praise (Score: 1) by Ego_Rocks2x on Wednesday, August 01,2012 (18: 02: 36) Praise God, my friend, for such a beautiful and heartwarming writing! Amen!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 August 2012

cjkrieger You got it! May we all sing his praise!

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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