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(Pudsey, Leeds)

Sinners To The Victims

In a life of pain and wonder
nothing is what it seems
everything is shrouded by mystery
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Sometimes victims are just too scared to do anything, so the sinner gets away to sin again.
If somebody tells me I try to help, but I can only do so much.

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  • Sulaymon Tadese Faozahny (8/5/2013 4:38:00 AM)

    Splendid! great peom and nice one

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  • Paola Degli Esposti (8/3/2013 10:30:00 AM)

    very beautiful writing. Thank you.

  • Jesse Ellsbury (7/31/2013 11:12:00 AM)

    The helplessness of the subject of this poem is painfully palpable. I really like the compassion and the intimation that we are all both the archers and the targets of the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune, to quote Shakespeare. Well done.

  • Kevin Patrick (7/27/2013 11:47:00 PM)

    This was a painful read, I don't know why but I just find this slightly troubling, what is normal, still a good write

  • Heather Wilkins (7/24/2013 6:21:00 PM)

    your last stanza reveals the truth of sinning. someone must pay for it. excellent write

  • Patricia Grantham (7/22/2013 6:51:00 PM)

    The sinner should turn around and repent of their wicked ways and also ask Gods
    forgiveness just like the victims. When it rains or shines it falls on the just as well
    as the unjust. Victims do not grow weary of well doing for in due time you will reap
    just what you sow. Very inspiring write Dave.

  • Ankur Thakur (7/20/2013 5:55:00 AM)

    Sir, your poem was a treat to read.nicely written.. I enjoyed it.

    And let me quote
    Mahatama Gandhi
    'HATE THE SIN, LOVE THE SINNER'!

    :)

  • Ankur Thakur (7/20/2013 5:36:00 AM)

    Sir,
    besides your poem your notes about this poem are also praisable.

  • Ellias Anderson (7/19/2013 3:19:00 AM)

    This poem is a nice piece. Meaningful thoughts. People oustside are passing a life full of nothing. Really, where are we going? We must start to learn and see new things in life. I agree there are so many injustice. Very well Dave

  • Kay Tee (7/16/2013 3:34:00 PM)

    Beautiful and meaningful. Loved it.

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