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TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila . (25TH OF APRIL / PaLeSTiNe)
Sipping Feelings, Spiritual Red
To imitate..
you have to learn how to wait,
your fear is very clear
with my heart I can hear,
with my eyes auscultate,
speed of light to a crawling
can't be rate
day by day, shedding tears
when you bear, deeply love accumulate,
your dreams were a bed, her dreams as a kid
only love her bread,
to be loved with a will
colored patience,
raising head,
to be you, eating thoughts,
sipping feelings,
spiritual red,
To be high or to fall, to be alive or a dead,
in between is a piece of a thread,
To be unique, you have to be as the greek
with a history, never fake
To be you, united be soul and mind
all of you, no one break
To be an ocean you have to be many seas,
many lakes
To be a true, always be only you.
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That fifth line gives me the idea that the poet has had a very sublime experience.
Nice challenge. Enormous feelings but fake expression... I think you are hiding your fears and your desires behind strong words trying to mix your wishes with unsatisfactory reality.
Yes my dear love is full of passion but it is not that much complicated (the way I figure from your poem) . The world started by a word and the love might sparkle with one clear confident expression.
Hoping you get what you really want.
Adnan.
I love how the meaning is masked but the whole poem has perfect meaning to you the poet. Very nice
Lots of real feelings or should I say Real quotes on life as you should live, inner happiness the gem to keep the theme of of avatar....knockout write+++10
regards
Excellent imagery, flambouyance as usual, at the top of the world.10s
ohhhhhhhhh..lolllllllll you truly made me laugh..
this is nice, younger version of the proverbs...cheers
'Never fake
To be you, united be soul and mind
all of you'
Rachel Ann Butler
Whatever I say, that will be too low a praise. This was simply amazing, one of best poems I have read. Powerful thoughts, penned in a way that the reader is forced to dwell deeper into each word and relate it to his life. Thought provoking and brilliant. The message is strong telling us to hold on to our true selves and not to try to be some one else. ' To be a true, always be only you' This line has a magical effect. This one is down in my fav poems.
Very unique style and choice of words. Excellent for a thinking audience!