Miroslava Odalovic

Rookie - 46 Points (Montenegro)

Sister Moon - Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

sister moon keep me warm
keep me close deeply keep
my inner fears beneath your crust
for fear I will for fear I must
eat your bitter bread
breathe your words unsaid
to whitewash all my days
daily paling dearly paid


Comments about Sister Moon by Miroslava Odalovic

  • Gold Star - 19,355 Points Sandra Feldman (12/14/2014 3:41:00 AM)

    The sadness and solitude of the Moon is reflected in this excellent poem.
    Your rapport with your sister moon is perfect. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (12/14/2014 1:42:00 AM)

    wow its been a long time havent met you
    i love this poem :) very well written
    _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (4/17/2014 8:43:00 AM)

    brief but rich in meaning/lovely (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 4, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 5, 2014


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