Sitting On A Bridal Stage Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Sitting On A Bridal Stage

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What are the daughters!
What are the grand daughters!
Sitting on a bridal stage,
adding a beautiful page,
in a language to be felt only,
a bud of rose for smelt only,
set in a mold of dreams,
slowly swimming in the nature's streams,
seeing themselves as a bride of future,
an awaited and thrilling adventure,
hoping to get love of a lovely spouse,
at the cost of their years old house.
May I order you God?
If not, I request a nod,
give me a blessing moment for once only,
can you give it at once only?
A moment in that I can order to you,
after that I shall surrender to you,
you will not erase this beautiful page,
promise her before she leaves the stage!

Sitting On A Bridal Stage
Saturday, January 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 22 November 2018

give me a blessing moment for once only, can you give it at once only? A moment in that I can order to you, after that I shall surrender to you, new page in the book of life is marriage. with all your experiences in life you write these lines dear poet Akhtar. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 January 2016

A beautiful page of life; with the muse of love. Nice work.

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Nosheen Irfan 18 January 2016

Marriage is indeed a new page to a person's book. For a girl it is more so because she has to leave everything behind. A beautiful theme to write on with deep feeling of affection for daughters and granddaughters. A lovely picture to go with a lovely thought.

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Kelly Kurt 17 January 2016

A lovely photo and a very lovely thought.

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