Ms. Nivedita

Sz ~ burning calorie
Gz ~ bruising calorie.

Sz ~ trimming body
Gz ~ treading psyche.

Sz ~ blooming blush
Gz ~ bereavement hush.

Sz ~ fluent flowering
Gz ~ blued blurring.

Sz ~ Standing ovation of cheers
Gz ~ Standing elegy of tears.

Red Rose to Sz ~ Applause
Red Rose to Gz ~ Solace.


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Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2009
Edited: Thursday, February 25, 2010

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  • Rookie Lysa Rohlsen (8/5/2010 12:23:00 AM)

    you are an interesting poet... your work is short yet it gets you to begin thinking about how things really are... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points David Beckham (7/29/2010 11:51:00 AM)

    The grand state of 'Opposite, attraction' Like trying to fuse 2 hydrogen molecules! ! lol great work as always 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ramesh Adwant (6/14/2010 9:00:00 AM)

    SIZE ZERO - women's way to featherweightness
    GROUND ZERO - terrorists' traumatic torment of twin towers. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (5/31/2010 1:37:00 PM)

    A poetry with difference…infused with high emotive elements…especially elegy for victims of any violence furiousness

    A poetry of polarized ideas SZ and GZ and well dictioned… thanks for such comparative study

    10++ [as prayer marks for the victims] …

    PS Thanks for info to Rediffusion Effusion (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Katang Chakravorty (5/28/2010 12:36:00 PM)

    But very humane and finer distinction is sliced and reached to acme: Sz ~ Standing ovation of cheers/Gz ~ Standing elegy of tears.
    Finely conceived

    PS My sincere thanks to Rediffusion Effusion for deep delving address about SZ and GZ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lynn Glover (5/7/2010 7:33:00 PM)

    Sorry Niv but like Ravi A I did not get the theme after several tries and I want to give everyone who tried a 10+. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Ravi A (3/10/2010 6:57:00 AM)

    Honestly speaking I could not catch the theme in one or two readings. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr. V. Chakravorty (1/9/2010 9:57:00 AM)

    Very much ‘Common’ yet ‘Uncommon’…like Low / High tide of Life..

    Amazing description / comparison…
    10+ [For Elegy]
    Dr. V. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rediffusion [bapi] Effusion [chakravorty] (12/22/2009 12:45:00 PM)

    Any thing in world may be subject of poetry…here poet in very able way handled both the subjects …having no relation to each other…and…

    ‘…Sz ~ Standing ovation of cheers // Gz ~ Standing elegy of tears….’

    These 2 lines make smile and weep…what a wondrous contrast poet has portrayed…
    Tearful 10++ for elegy… (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amitabha Bagchi (12/16/2009 11:11:00 PM)

    Light and Shade of Life compared very nicely…indeed an offbeat theme…but int6o the core…
    London (Report) Reply

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