~ Size Zero ~ Ground Zero ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Size Zero ~ Ground Zero ~

Rating: 4.5


~ SIZE ZERO ~ GROUND ZERO ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK.
30.11.09.

Sz ~ burning calorie
Gz ~ bruising calorie.

Sz ~ trimming body
Gz ~ treading psyche.

Sz ~ blooming blush
Gz ~ bereavement hush.

Sz ~ fluent flowering
Gz ~ blued blurring.

Sz ~ Standing ovation of cheers
Gz ~ Standing elegy of tears.

Red Rose to Sz ~ Applause
Red Rose to Gz ~ Solace.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Chowdhury 09 December 2009

very nice and interesting comparison. thanks for sharing.

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Amitabha Bagchi 16 December 2009

Light and Shade of Life compared very nicely…indeed an offbeat theme…but int6o the core… Ten++ AB London

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Any thing in world may be subject of poetry…here poet in very able way handled both the subjects …having no relation to each other…and… ‘…Sz ~ Standing ovation of cheers // Gz ~ Standing elegy of tears….’ These 2 lines make smile and weep…what a wondrous contrast poet has portrayed… Tearful 10++ for elegy…

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 January 2010

quite unique! nice job!

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Dr. V. Chakravorty 09 January 2010

Very much ‘Common’ yet ‘Uncommon’…like Low / High tide of Life.. Amazing description / comparison… 10+ [For Elegy] Dr. V.

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Ramesh Rai 28 May 2012

you have an unique style of composing poem. fantastic write.

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Seema Chowdhury 02 October 2010

you have a unique style. Good job, keep it up.

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Lysa Rohlsen 05 August 2010

you are an interesting poet... your work is short yet it gets you to begin thinking about how things really are...

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David Beckham 29 July 2010

The grand state of 'Opposite, attraction' Like trying to fuse 2 hydrogen molecules! ! lol great work as always 10

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Ramesh Adwant 14 June 2010

SIZE ZERO - women's way to featherweightness GROUND ZERO - terrorists' traumatic torment of twin towers.

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