MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.


~ Size Zero ~ Ground Zero ~ - Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ SIZE ZERO ~ GROUND ZERO ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK.
30.11.09.

Sz ~ burning calorie
Gz ~ bruising calorie.

Sz ~ trimming body
Gz ~ treading psyche.

Sz ~ blooming blush
Gz ~ bereavement hush.

Sz ~ fluent flowering
Gz ~ blued blurring.

Sz ~ Standing ovation of cheers
Gz ~ Standing elegy of tears.

Red Rose to Sz ~ Applause
Red Rose to Gz ~ Solace.

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Comments about ~ Size Zero ~ Ground Zero ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • Ramesh Rai (5/28/2012 2:48:00 AM)


    you have an unique style of composing poem. fantastic write. (Report) Reply

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  • (10/2/2010 8:12:00 AM)


    you have a unique style.
    Good job, keep it up.
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  • (8/5/2010 12:23:00 AM)


    you are an interesting poet... your work is short yet it gets you to begin thinking about how things really are... (Report) Reply

  • (7/29/2010 11:51:00 AM)


    The grand state of 'Opposite, attraction' Like trying to fuse 2 hydrogen molecules! ! lol great work as always 10 (Report) Reply

  • (6/14/2010 9:00:00 AM)


    SIZE ZERO - women's way to featherweightness
    GROUND ZERO - terrorists' traumatic torment of twin towers.
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  • (5/31/2010 1:37:00 PM)


    A poetry with difference…infused with high emotive elements…especially elegy for victims of any violence furiousness

    A poetry of polarized ideas SZ and GZ and well dictioned… thanks for such comparative study

    10++ [as prayer marks for the victims] …
    dr.sakti

    PS Thanks for info to Rediffusion Effusion
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  • (5/28/2010 12:36:00 PM)


    But very humane and finer distinction is sliced and reached to acme: Sz ~ Standing ovation of cheers/Gz ~ Standing elegy of tears.
    Finely conceived
    10++

    PS My sincere thanks to Rediffusion Effusion for deep delving address about SZ and GZ
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  • (5/7/2010 7:33:00 PM)


    Sorry Niv but like Ravi A I did not get the theme after several tries and I want to give everyone who tried a 10+. (Report) Reply

  • Ravi A (3/10/2010 6:57:00 AM)


    Honestly speaking I could not catch the theme in one or two readings. (Report) Reply

  • Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee (2/22/2010 8:49:00 AM)


    Ideas and words met in a precise mathematical lines.... (Report) Reply

  • (1/9/2010 9:57:00 AM)


    Very much ‘Common’ yet ‘Uncommon’…like Low / High tide of Life..

    Amazing description / comparison…
    10+ [For Elegy]
    Dr. V.
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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (1/3/2010 1:59:00 AM)


    quite unique! nice job! (Report) Reply

  • (12/22/2009 12:45:00 PM)


    Any thing in world may be subject of poetry…here poet in very able way handled both the subjects …having no relation to each other…and…

    ‘…Sz ~ Standing ovation of cheers // Gz ~ Standing elegy of tears….’

    These 2 lines make smile and weep…what a wondrous contrast poet has portrayed…
    Tearful 10++ for elegy…
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  • (12/16/2009 11:11:00 PM)


    Light and Shade of Life compared very nicely…indeed an offbeat theme…but int6o the core…
    Ten++
    AB
    London
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  • (12/9/2009 2:05:00 PM)


    very nice and interesting comparison.
    thanks for sharing.
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  • (12/9/2009 1:10:00 PM)


    unique comparison...an interesting verses.....10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2009 6:21:00 AM)


    Very unusual.Haunting, lyrical last lines.

    Kind regards,

    Sandra
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  • (12/6/2009 8:40:00 AM)


    A sort of comparison to give a wonderful contrast. (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2009 6:20:00 AM)


    A wonderful comparative poem (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2009 2:35:00 PM)


    Agree with Joe…interesting contrast…

    Masterly imagined and jettisoned from poetic 'think-tank’
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 25, 2010


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