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Sky Builders - Poem by rose flores rosevoc2

There are two eyes in the sky,
small as pebbles then big as a rock.

Slowly they merge into halos
and smiley angels;
Then a pond of air
and clear glass enough to see
the meek faces of boatmen
building a sky.


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caramoan. boatmen. rosevoc2

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  • Gold Star - 48,977 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/3/2012 4:29:00 AM)

    P.S.....CONGRATS on 200 Poems! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 48,977 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/3/2012 4:28:00 AM)

    An impressive potpori of resplendent imagescape is discharged here in a mere 42 word poem....You paint a poetic canvass with much pictorial grandeur...~FjR~ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 3, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 3, 2012


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