Treasure Island

Michelle Kafka

(Manitoba, Canada)

Sky's Beauty


Wind
sways and swaggers
Wolves
frolic and howl
Human eye
watches from concealed corner
She
stands, lashes black, lids blue, lips red
Skirt hiked up
Lust's
harbinger
whispering
smiling
sighing
dancing
crying
trying

Sun chases Moon around room
Sun tenderly touches Moon's lips; a luminescent view
Taking Sun in her hands, light pierces darkness
Sun's serene strong face smiles
Moon a small trembling timid stone
Sun dances in Moon's warm lake
Paradise
Pink Moon - astronomical, phenomenal
Sun's shaft - exquisite and unhindered.

Wreathed in love
invigorating
stimulating
World of the Night
rhythmic chant
Supernatural eye
watches from the dark corner -
IsIs

Submitted: Thursday, July 30, 2009

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  • Louis Rams (9/3/2009 8:20:00 PM)

    i see this in two different ways, and i'll explain.
    the first is all the beauties that the LORD has created for us to see, such
    as the sun, moon, wind, wolves. and there is nothing to compare to what
    he has given us.
    the second is a sexual stimulating scene between the sun and the moon
    in all their glory. e.g. suns shaft instead of suns rays.
    sun tenderly touches moons lips.

    so as i read this poem which you wrote so beautifully
    it carries me to both sides of the coin.

    a double ten for your pen. (Report) Reply

  • Patrick A. Martin (8/16/2009 9:09:00 PM)

    You are a wonderful weaver of words and emotions which creates extaordinary images thank you for writing down the artists impressions as you have observed them I'm sure you give to each other because of your talents. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (8/10/2009 11:32:00 PM)

    Pink Moon - astronomical
    , phenomenal
    Sun's shaft - exquisite and unhindered.........................oh what a kind of imagery on the etching face of florence, unleashing a matrix of dynamics that swoon mortality to prolong by exuberance lusciuos glow as when entwines in the night of hours unequaled, wrought ingenious across profoundity of ocean`s deep in metaphors,10+++++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Michelle Kafka (8/7/2009 8:35:00 PM)

    Thank you for your kind words and support. Actually this poem was inspired by an artist friend's artwork. Warm thanks to the artist - Brodi Surrealist! Thank you for the rating Hasmukh! (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/31/2009 5:07:00 AM)

    Sun chases Moon around room
    Sun tenderly touches Moon's lips; a luminescent view
    beautiful poem with vision and i liked it most. it has clear insight and deserves...10

    read mine dark clound.. cool breeze and colour (Report) Reply

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