Michelle Kafka

Rookie (Manitoba, Canada)

Sky's Beauty - Poem by Michelle Kafka

sways and swaggers
frolic and howl
Human eye
watches from concealed corner
stands, lashes black, lids blue, lips red
Skirt hiked up

Sun chases Moon around room
Sun tenderly touches Moon's lips; a luminescent view
Taking Sun in her hands, light pierces darkness
Sun's serene strong face smiles
Moon a small trembling timid stone
Sun dances in Moon's warm lake
Pink Moon - astronomical, phenomenal
Sun's shaft - exquisite and unhindered.

Wreathed in love
World of the Night
rhythmic chant
Supernatural eye
watches from the dark corner -

Comments about Sky's Beauty by Michelle Kafka

  • Gold Star - 19,412 Points Ramesh Rai (10/18/2014 9:25:00 AM)

    I agree with Poet Louis Rams. Thanks for share (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (1/12/2010 8:13:00 PM)

    reality based idea and impressive style of writing..liked it 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,354 Points Louis Rams (9/3/2009 8:20:00 PM)

    i see this in two different ways, and i'll explain.
    the first is all the beauties that the LORD has created for us to see, such
    as the sun, moon, wind, wolves. and there is nothing to compare to what
    he has given us.
    the second is a sexual stimulating scene between the sun and the moon
    in all their glory. e.g. suns shaft instead of suns rays.
    sun tenderly touches moons lips.

    so as i read this poem which you wrote so beautifully
    it carries me to both sides of the coin.

    a double ten for your pen. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Patrick A. Martin (8/16/2009 9:09:00 PM)

    You are a wonderful weaver of words and emotions which creates extaordinary images thank you for writing down the artists impressions as you have observed them I'm sure you give to each other because of your talents. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Siddharth Singh (8/15/2009 2:32:00 AM)

    Exquisite and unhindered, thats what
    your poem is. Wonderful! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 569 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (8/10/2009 11:32:00 PM)

    Pink Moon - astronomical
    , phenomenal
    Sun's shaft - exquisite and unhindered.........................oh what a kind of imagery on the etching face of florence, unleashing a matrix of dynamics that swoon mortality to prolong by exuberance lusciuos glow as when entwines in the night of hours unequaled, wrought ingenious across profoundity of ocean`s deep in metaphors,10+++++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michelle Kafka (8/7/2009 8:35:00 PM)

    Thank you for your kind words and support. Actually this poem was inspired by an artist friend's artwork. Warm thanks to the artist - Brodi Surrealist! Thank you for the rating Hasmukh! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Obinna Eruchie (7/31/2009 10:06:00 AM)

    An admiring piece you have penned. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 82,441 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/31/2009 5:07:00 AM)

    Sun chases Moon around room
    Sun tenderly touches Moon's lips; a luminescent view
    beautiful poem with vision and i liked it most. it has clear insight and deserves...10

    read mine dark clound.. cool breeze and colour (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (7/30/2009 10:30:00 PM)

    nice piece....------- (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 30, 2009

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