jerine james

Rookie - 30 Points (07/05/1981 / Kuwait)

Sleep! Sleep! Sleep! - Poem by jerine james

SLEEP

Sleep, sleep, sleep
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Comments about Sleep! Sleep! Sleep! by jerine james

  • Veteran Poet - 1,486 Points Adeline Foster (7/27/2014 2:47:00 PM)

    Nice chant, might be used as a mantra. Read mine - Mantra -
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  • Gold Star - 22,327 Points * Sunprincess * (7/17/2014 9:47:00 PM)

    ........very nice...when we are in the mist of sleep it feels nice...especially with a little cool breeze...enjoyed this beautiful poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joseph Sanchez (4/28/2014 10:35:00 AM)

    Sleep, sleep, sleep
    It’s magnificent and nice,
    With dreams beyond wonder,
    Sleep! sleep! sleep!

    Sleep, sleep, sleep
    Eyes tightly closed,
    A little smile on you r cheeks,
    Feeling the warm sensations
    Of the pure and precious sleep, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Your Mama (6/9/2009 7:27:00 PM)

    some say sleep is what we would miss most if we had to live without it...it's true. those of us that have trouble sleeping usually end up with 'suicide' on how they died. really, it should have said 'insomnia'. feels like your living one long day...i know from experience. nice poem! ! i like how you used the chant throughout. keep writing! !
    I live on a 24 hour clock with cat-naps, sleep? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew Morra (1/11/2009 8:29:00 AM)

    some say sleep is what we would miss most if we had to live without it...it's true. those of us that have trouble sleeping usually end up with 'suicide' on how they died. really, it should have said 'insomnia'. feels like your living one long day...i know from experience. nice poem! ! i like how you used the chant throughout. keep writing! ! (Report) Reply








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