Slight Shadow. Poem by Fay Slimm

Slight Shadow.

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The shadow
that parts us
..........is slight.
starting
With not even
a whisper
.....of darkness.
We are.......
all but the pair
that fate
.........decreed.
.Not distance
but love...........
brings us
..........nearer,
indeed
a breath.......
of remembered
summertime
.......air
gives no
slighter
......a shadow
that
somewhere
Keeps us
apart.
A mere.........
heartbeat away
Is where......
we are
..........now.
and where
we will
.........stay.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Gibson 04 August 2009

One is in darkness the other in light time is the difference between day and night paths of darkness do often collide when someone special is close by your side

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Carol Gall 26 July 2009

a well written poem emotions run

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Sue Sie 26 July 2009

Like the format of this one Fay...a very interesting verse, ,10++ Sue

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