Slipping Away Poem by Adam Iron Thorn

Slipping Away

Rating: 5.0


We keep losing touch,
Don't let me lose you.
Feels like your slipping,
You've done slipped away.
Knew it would be hard,
But thought that we'd make it.
You couldn't handle the pressure,
Even though I promised you the world.
I will wait for you,
Like I told you I would.
If I have to wait an eternity,
It would be worth it to hold you again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebekka Bear 29 August 2011

this is really good and you are a good writer continue to rite because when i read your writing i can understand how you feel or felt

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