Smile Poem by Nanthinii Mohan

Smile

Rating: 4.6


A golden carpet spread vast and wide,
Bringing us before, a dancing silvery deluge!
As if a new pink bud waking up,
From its deep and deep sleep;
Shows us a long and pretty cheerfulness,
Welcoming the hearts in all means!
The tinkling teeth veils behind it,
Yearning to have a worldly sight.
Even its solemn silence before us,
Warms our heart by all ways.
Makes the one standing before- to glisten;
Grabbing all the others attention.
Gifting us a life of divine,
It also paves a way, to live more and more!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jo George 23 February 2012

The tinkling teeth veils behind it, Yearning to have a worldly sight! Even its solemn silence before us, Warms our heart by all ways! Lovely lines which brings happiness to the heart and smile to everyone's face.

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Sharron Stephenson 24 February 2012

a swwet and well thought out words

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Supriya Prathapan 25 February 2012

A smile, at the right time, never fails to enliven the spirits of those around us. The tinkling teeth veils behind it, Yearning to have a worldly sight! Beautiful lines. 10++

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Jasmine Jones 27 February 2012

This poem is so cool it reminds me of Cinderella when she came to the ball and everyone stopped and looked at her because she's so beautiful

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Soulful Heart 28 February 2012

that poem really grabs attention................may u smile through the miles.......

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Dev Anand 07 April 2016

smile as a golden carpet. there is always great attraction in the smile of a woman...... inviting...... love it. dev

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 April 2016

Makes the one standing before- to glisten; Grabbing all the others attention. Gifting us a life of divine, It also paves a way, to live more and more! the great power of a smile. it attracts and the people are affected by this lovely language of the smile..... may you smile always. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Erica Santana 20 March 2012

Great poem I enjoyed reading it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2012

Gifting us a life of divine, It also paves a way, to live more and more! .. smile is great asset.. beautifully written...10

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Bree Bryner 15 March 2012

This poem is very nice. Very well written and speaks with a lot of emotion also. Keep up the good work.

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