Smile Please Poem by salu salu
Smile Please
he put me on desk
pushed one shoulder to left
pulled another to right
had a kick on jaw n lifted up
tightened my button on neck
resumed back to his machine
peeping n unsatisfied ran back to me
pushed my shoulder down again
pulled my spring hair n rolled back
put all the giant lights on
left n right front n back
I was completely at a loss
back to his machine
he ordered
Look at me
Smile please!
Ready one two three!
Click! ! !
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In memory of a photograph taken 35 years back, still I love my buffoon photo, no matching photos ‘been taken yet.
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Salu
niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice i love it.... it is geat poem...10+++++++++++ well done
Sweet poem. I like it like I imagining a memory of mine.. beautiful..
In the beginning itself I caught what you are finally going to say. A good work. A vivid scene seen through very humorous angle. You have hit at the right spot. When I read this poem, I was reminded of a scene from a film in which the photographer does all similar things to a couple, especially to the husband who wears a serious face and fails to smile. It is a cracking scene.
excellent piece of writing salu, keeps you glue'd to your seat....lovely Best wishes Jon
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Great funny poem. Loved it. Hadda givvit atenner. God bless all poets-MJG.