Smitten Poem by Shruti Goswami

Smitten

Rating: 5.0


Wanderlust bug….
Smitten..by a thug…
Who knows not..what he has stolen..
My heart it is…poor devil…
Leave not…walk the walk..talk the talk..
Nay..he said..too tired to walk..too lazy to talk…
I want to sink into the depths of slumber.
Lie down..then….and let my heart..lie with you…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Pintu Mahakul 03 November 2014

Smitten by a hug, who knows not what he has stolen......wonderful explanation and beautiful poem.

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Ken E Hall 25 October 2014

Smitten the tool of young at heart seems that the thug will be tamed...the command of the poem is great...regards

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Kee Thampi 22 June 2011

To redeem the wind and old dreams Smitten..by a thug… Who knows not..what he has stolen.. My heart it is…poor devil… Leave not…walk the walk..talk the talk.. Nay..he said..too tired to walk..too lazy to talk… I want to sink into the depths love the bite of life

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 22 June 2011

Great poem. Written well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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