Smitten Poem by victoria haigh

Smitten

Rating: 4.8


From the moment i saw her i was totally smitten
She was gorgeous and i couldnt avert my eyes
Her soft peachy skin
Her piercing blue eyes
Her blonde hair soft and fine
So perfect
Perfect in every way

And when i finally got her home
I had the time to devote to her totally
A bond i never ever would break
To have this being so dear to me
To love unconditionally
Forever
My daughter Lorena

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Daly 17 December 2005

I'm a sucker for twists in the tail. This is done so masterfully and is a great piece of work.

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