Smoke Poem by Loreta Muskardin

Smoke

Rating: 4.0


How sticky when
it attaches itself
to the Chivas bottles
and overflowing glasses
a smoke metamorphosed
into fingerprints
glued to the eyeglasses
of silent drunken poets

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 08 September 2007

Thick. Heavy, weighted verse. Yet subtly so. Fitting to/for the title. keep on SusxGLx

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